COMBINED SPECIAL IN PERSON "CPR in the ER with SCR AND ECR" AND ONGOING ONLINE RECORDED "E.R. for Extended Responses, SCR, Reading, and Editing/Revising Band-Aids & Surgery Series"
THIS WEEK'S SPECIAL DISCOUNT PRICE FOR IN PERSON AND ONLINE RECORDED TRAINING REGISTRATION
THIS WEEK'S DISCOUNT PRICE: $90
IMPORTANT INCENTIVE FOR TEACHERS WHO TAKE THE TIME TO TELL OTHER CAMPUSES AND DISTRICTS ABOUT US:
IF WE DO A TRAINING AT YOURS OR ANY OTHER CAMPUS OR DISTRICT BECAUSE OF YOUR TESTIMONIAL AND SHARING OUR INFORMATION, YOU WILL RECEIVE A $100 FINDER'S FEE FOR EACH DAY THAT WE BOOK PROVIDED THAT YOU DO NOT HAVE CONTROL OF HOW THAT CAMPUS OR DISTRICTS SPENDS MONEY. :)
TARGET AGE/GRADE ABILITY LEVEL: 8-14 YEARS OLD OR HIGH SCHOOL STUDENTS ON A 3RD TO 8TH GRADE ABILITY LEVEL
REGISTERING AND PAYING BY DEBIT, CREDIT CARD, PAY PAL, OR PURCHASE ORDER SUPPLYING PURCHASE ORDER BEFORE TRAINING DATE AND PAYING BEFORE, ON TRAINING DATE, OR WITHIN 30 DAYS
THE SOONER YOU REGISTER AND PAY OR SEND A PURCHASE ORDER, THE SOONER YOU WILL BEGIN TO RECEIVE THE ONLINE RECORDED GUIDANCE/LESSONS/VIDEOS/PRACTICE TESTS, AND YOUR HARD COPIES OF MATERIALS! DON'T WAIT UNTIL A WEEK OR TWO BEFORE YOUR IN PERSON SESSION!
DIRECTIONS: ENTER THE QUANTITY OF TEACHERS, CLICK ADD TO CART, THEN WRITE EACH TEACHER'S NAME, EMAIL ADDRESS, GRADE, AND THE PREFERRED IN PERSON TRAINING CITY/DATE IN THE BOX LABELED "SPECIAL INSTRUCTIONS TO SELLER".
THE HARD COPIES OF YOUR MATERIALS WILL NORMALLY BE SENT BY USPS WITHIN 3 TO 5 BUSINESS DAYS.
PURCHASE ORDERS MUST REGISTER HERE FIRST AND PO MUST BE IN PLACE AND PREFERABLY BE PAID BEFORE THE DATE OF THE IN PERSON TRAINING TO GET THIS PRICE! ENTER THE PRICE OF $100 PER TEACHER ON YOUR DISTRICT REQUISITION/PURCHASE ORDER. SEND AN EMAIL TO US RIGHT AWAY AFTER REGISTERING AT writing_doctor@yahoo.com REQUESTING OUR W-9, A QUOTE, AND SEND US ANY DISTRICT PAPERWORK WHEN USING PURCHASE ORDER OPTION AT CHECKOUT. YOUR HARD COPIES OF MATERIALS WHEN REGISTERING WITH PURCHASE ORDER WILL BE SENT WITHIN 3 to 5 DAYS OF US RECEIVING A COPY OF THE PO BY EMAIL AT writing_doctor@yahoo.com.
HARD COPIES OF MATERIALS WILL BE SENT BY USPS WITHIN 3 TO 5 DAYS OF PURCHASE UNLESS IT IS TOO CLOSE TO THE TRAINING DATE. IN THAT CASE, THE MATERIALS WILL BE GIVEN TO YOU AT THE IN PERSON TRAINING LOCATION YOU SIGN UP FOR WHEN REGISTERING HERE.
PURCHASE ORDER MUST BE IN PLACE AND IN OUR HANDS BEFORE DATE OF IN PERSON TRAINING TO QUALIFY. UPON REGISTERING, EMAIL US AT writing_doctor@yahoo.com for a quote and our w-9, AND SEND US ANY REQUIRED DISTRICT PAPER WORK TO PROCESS A REQUISITION/PURCHASE ORDER. ENTER A PRICE OF $100 PER TEACHER ON ANY REQUISTIONS/PURCHASE ORDERS MADE.
PAYMENT:
PAYMENT FOR PURCHASE ORDER CAN BE MADE AFTER TRAINING DATE AS LONG AS WE RECEIVE THE PURCHASE ORDER BEFORE DATE OF TRAINING. HARD COPIES OF MATERIALS WILL BE SENT BY USPS WITHIN 3 TO 5 DAYS OF US RECEIVING A COPY OF THE PURCHASE ORDER BY EMAIL AT writing_doctor@yahoo.com UNLESS IT IS TOO CLOSE TO THE TRAINING DATE. IN THAT CASE, THE MATERIALS WILL BE GIVEN TO YOU AT THE IN PERSON TRAINING LOCATION ON THAT DAY.
IN PERSON ONE DAY TRAINING DESCRIPTION:
This is included at no extra charge a part of the Texas Teacher Training Tour called, "CPR in the ER for the SCR and ECR" and vise versa. 😀
IN PERSON TRAINING DATES AND CITIES:
ALL TIMES WILL BE 8 AM TO 4 PM WITH A 60 TO 90 MINUTE LUNCH
SEPTEMBER 23 - SAN ANTONIO
SEPTEMBER 30- AUSTIN
OCTOBER 7 - HOUSTON
OCTOBER 14 - DALLAS
OCTOBER 21 - TYLER
OCTOBER 28 - FORT WORTH
NOVEMBER 4 - LUBBOCK
NOVEMBER 11 - EL PASO
NOVEMBER 18 - LAREDO
DECEMBER 2 - BEAUMONT
DECEMBER 9 - MIDLAND
Hotels and Addresses will be announced one week to ten days prior to each training date to give me an accurate count of how big a room I will need and how many chairs/tables to accommodate all of those in attendance.
ONLINE RECORDED TRAINING DESCRIPTION
(100 TO 200 HOURS OF IN DEPTH GUIDANCE THROUGH EMAIL, YOU TUBE, FACEBOOK, AND MESSENGER, INSTAGRAM, AND TWITTER (X) UNTIL THE TEST
E.R. (Emergency Room) for Short Constructed, Extended Constructed Essay Responses, AND Editing/Revising/Reading Online Recorded Band-Aids & Surgery Series!
This recorded writing series will cover around half of the points on the test for each level:
Elementary - 26 Points Middle School - 28 Points High School - 32 Points
It will be presented in a meaningful modeling & materials video format in 5 to 20 minute recorded lessons and sent to you be email. by The ELAR & Writing Doctor: Bill MacDonald
There will be from 100 to 200 hours of modeling and mentoring using visual, auditory, and kinesthetic strategies will be shared so that you can use them to plan & implement effective activities and lessons!
NOTE: The first series of lessons in the ECR portion of the training will focus on what went wrong to cause almost 2 million students to get four zeroes from the readers in the areas of organization, development, and/or conventions. It's critical that we address the cracks in the foundation before we try to work on the walls and the roof we call the essay response to a passage. I will also focus on the items of all question types that got the lowest percent correct on the state averages in the item analysis reports.
PURPOSES & PROCESSS OF WRITING EXTENDED ESSAY RESPONSES FOR:
* Informative/Expository
* Opinion/Argumentative
* Correspondence/Letter
* Editing & Revising the Final Product
* Editing & Revising Sentences, Paragraphs, & Passages
THIS ONLINE RECORDED TRAINING SERIES WILL INCLUDE ALL OF THE FOLLOWING!
2023-2024 Full Color Hard Copies of These Sent by USPS to the Address on Your Order for the First 100 People to Purchase!
Binder of our ELAR & Writing Guide (Updates throughout the year will be emailed digitally.)
Set of 25 Advanced or Primary 11” x 17” ELAR & Writing Folders for All Question Types (SPANISH OPTION IS AVAILABLE INSTEAD ON REQUEST)
Set of 25 11” x 17” 2023-2024 Graphic Organizers for ECR, Editing, Revising, & Reading (SPANISH OPTION IS AVAILABLE INSTEAD ON REQUEST)
Digital Copies of All of the Above and New Practice Tests for 2023-2024 in both Digital & Online Formats for ECR, Editing, Revising, Regular Multiple Choice Reading, and All SCR Type Questions
Free One Time Admission to Any of the 13 Texas Training Tour Locations Held During the 2023-2024 School Year ($150 Value)
Trainings will be held in the 13 locations mentioned above. Don't forget to include your preferred in person date and location when registering to have the best chance of reserving a spot for yourself!
Analytic Scoring of Up to 5 Student ECR Essays From This Past or Coming School Year Based on TEA Scoring Guides
Essays Come with a Score, Reasons for the Score, and Detailed Student-Friendly Suggestions for Improvement.
Essays will be graded in the order they are received by email. Prompts and Passage Pages Must Be Included!
Additional analytic scoring is available at $10 per essay. About 10 minutes will be spent on each essay for this price.
MODELING OF MOST VIDEOS WILL BE ANYWHERE BETWEEN 5 TO 20 MINUTES IN LENGTH RECORDED LESSON TOPICS THAT WILL BE UPLOADED AS UNLISTED AND PUBLIC POSTSK ON OUR YOU TUBE PAGE AND TO OUR FACEBOOK GROUP SO THAT YOU CAN WATCH THEM AT YOUR OWN CONVENIENCE AND PACE:
understanding the purpose/prompt, responding to the prompt based on ability
levels, clear central/controlling ideas, thesis statements, claims, basic and
effective introductions, hooks/attention getters to use with text based prompts,
clearly connecting the evidence to the topic and idea used, how to explain and
explode each evidence example, basic and effective transitions/connections between ideas, basic and specific word choices, simple and effective conclusions, voice in text based writing, grade level appropriate strategies for paired passages, identifying and refuting counter evidence in 8th-10th grade, accurate grading and analytic student friendly feedback based on the scoring guides, editing and revising the essay based on feedback, editing sentences, paragraphs and passages using CUPSS, revising sentences paragraphs and passages using ARM
There will be a special emphasis on weakest areas of tests in all grade levels now that they have already been released in an online format.
