Revising Passage and Strategies Part Two: "The Show that Comes Around Once a Year"

This is a recorded webinar modeling revising strategies using a passage describing the history and importance of the Rio Grande Valley Livestock Show.  

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(You will not need to purchase this recorded video if you already bought the live or recorded version of READ-VISING Part One: Merging Reading and Writing in an ELAR World.  Just email me your order number and you will receive it within 24 hours.)

Purchase comes with the revising passage above,  RULES checklist for editing, and revising, key word strands for revising, READ-VISING graphic organizer, and detailed strategies modeled for all 9 questions using the following key word strands:

Question 1:  Replacing a vague word with one that is more specific

Question 2:  Deleting a sentence that is extraneous

Question 3:  BEST way to revise a sentence without repeating, run-ons, changing the content, or meaning

Question 4:  MOST effective way to revise a sentence:  eliminating distractors

Question 5:  Best way to combine two sentences

Question 6:  Adding a sentence that BEST supports the ideas presented in a paragraph

Question 7:  Adding a box sentence to a specific location in a paragraph

Question 8:  Revising a passage to eliminate repeated information

Question 9:  Adding a sentence to improve the conclusion of a paper