Recorded Webinar: REVISING PASSAGE AND STRATEGIES PART THREE;  A Letter to Mom and Dad

Recorded Webinar: REVISING PASSAGE AND STRATEGIES PART THREE; A Letter to Mom and Dad

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This is a recorded webinar modeling revising strategies using a passage written by a child to her parents trying to persuade them to allow her to have more time for playing video and online gaming.

$5 discount when sold as a single recorded video like this

(You will not need to purchase this recorded video if you already bought the live or recorded version of READ-VISING Part One: Merging Reading and Writing in an ELAR World.  Just email me your order number and you will receive it within 24 hours.)

Purchase comes with the revising passage above,, RULES checklist for editing, and revisjng, key word strands for revising, READ-VISING graphic organizer, and detailed strategies modeled for all 9 questions using the following key word strands:

Question 1:  MOST effective way to write a sentence

Question 2:  Replacing a sentence to provide a more effective claim at the end of the introductory paragraph

Question 3:  BEST way to combine two sentences

Question 4:  BEST transition at the beginning of a sentence

Question 5:  Removing a vague phrase and replacing it with a more precise phrase in a sentence

Question 6:  Adding a sentence that BEST supports the ideas presented in a paragraph

Question 7:  Replacing a vague topic sentence with one that is more effective and specific to the content of a paragraph

Question 8:  Revising a sentence to make the meaning more clear

Question 9:  Removing a sentence and replacing it with one that improves the conclusion of a paper


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