
Recorded Webinar: REVISING PASSAGE AND STRATEGIES PART THREE; A Letter to Mom and Dad
This is a recorded webinar modeling revising strategies using a passage written by a child to her parents trying to persuade them to allow her to have more time for playing video and online gaming.
$5 discount when sold as a single recorded video like this
Comes with the revising passage above, RULES checklist for editing, and revisjng, key word strands for revising, READ-VISING graphic organizer, and detailed strategies modeled for all 9 questions using the following key word strands:
Question 1: MOST effective way to write a sentence
Question 2: Replacing a sentence to provide a more effective claim at the end of the introductory paragraph
Question 3: BEST way to combine two sentences
Question 4: BEST transition at the beginning of a sentence
Question 5: Removing a vague phrase and replacing it with a more precise phrase in a sentence
Question 6: Adding a sentence that BEST supports the ideas presented in a paragraph
Question 7: Replacing a vague topic sentence with one that is more effective and specific to the content of a paragraph
Question 8: Revising a sentence to make the meaning more clear
Question 9: Removing a sentence and replacing it with one that improves the conclusion of a paper