Recorded Webinar: REVISING PASSAGE AND STRATEGIES PART THREE; A Letter to Mom and Dad

This is a recorded webinar modeling revising strategies using a passage written by a child to her parents trying to persuade them to allow her to have more time for playing video and online gaming.

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Comes with the revising passage above, RULES checklist for editing, and revisjng, key word strands for revising, READ-VISING graphic organizer, and detailed strategies modeled for all 9 questions using the following key word strands:

Question 1:  MOST effective way to write a sentence

Question 2:  Replacing a sentence to provide a more effective claim at the end of the introductory paragraph

Question 3:  BEST way to combine two sentences

Question 4:  BEST transition at the beginning of a sentence

Question 5:  Removing a vague phrase and replacing it with a more precise phrase in a sentence

Question 6:  Adding a sentence that BEST supports the ideas presented in a paragraph

Question 7:  Replacing a vague topic sentence with one that is more effective and specific to the content of a paragraph

Question 8:  Revising a sentence to make the meaning more clear

Question 9:  Removing a sentence and replacing it with one that improves the conclusion of a paper